Answer: Quite harsh marking
Explanation: Hey previous marker of a paper 2 exam
although some sentences presented itself to be quite questionable and didn't refer back to the question
we have been advised in the past to give marks for good analysis of quotes and you have done that student
However you have capped yourself to 13 marks for little reference back to the question and you do go on random tangents several times in your answer
I advise you watch videos on Mr Bruff since Paper 2 will be coming soon
